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读后续写思维拓展训练之18——增强表现力之一
运用“主句＋简短状语”结构
为了使描写更有表现力，要学会在主句的基础上加上简短状语。简短状语包括介词短语、分词、with复合结构、省略的定语从句、形容词和副词等。
佳句观摩
1.我忍住眼泪，努力挤出笑容。
一般句：I held back my tears and tried to squeeze a smile.
提升句：Holding back my tears, I tried to squeeze a smile.
2．沐浴在节日气氛中时，他兴高采烈。
一般句：When he was bathed in a festival atmosphere, he was in high spirits.
提升句：Bathed in a festival atmosphere, he was in high spirits.
3．出于好奇，他走近去找一个银色气球。
一般句：He approached to find a silver balloon for the curiosity.
提升句：Curiously, he approached to find a silver balloon.
4．带着惊讶和困惑，他勉强笑了笑。
一般句：With a mixture of surprise and confusion, he managed a forced smile.
提升句：Surprised and confused, he managed a forced smile.
