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Week 1
The daffodil bulbs have been planted side by side in soil, ①with the pointed ends facing up.Water ②has been added and the container was put in a cool,dark place.The bulbs are being watered regularly.
Week 3
A single stem has sprouted from each of the bulbs.On each stem are two leaves,③which are long and narrow with a waxy texture.The container has been moved to a sunny, but cool place.
Week 6
The stems have grown to around 20 centimetres tall ④and each has produced a single flower.The flowers are yellow and white,and shaped like trumpets.
①使用with复合结构作状语,使句式表达更加简洁。
②使用被动语态,使表达富于变化。
③使用非限制性定语从句,生动地描写出叶子的形态。
④使用并列连词and连接上下两句话,使表达衔接自然、流畅。
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