假如你是李华, 前天你收到英国笔友Kathy发来的电子邮件, 说她很想报名参加即将在当地举办的“汉语民歌演唱比赛(Singing Chinese Folk Songs Contest)”活动, 但信心不足。请你给她回复一封邮件, 内容包括:
1. 鼓励她积极报名参加;2. 帮助分析参加的意义;
3. 给她提几点建议。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Step 1:精准审题 谋篇布局
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人称
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第一人称(I); 第二人称(you)
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时态
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一般现在时, 一般将来时
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段落布局
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开头点题:鼓励对方参加比赛
主题段落:分析参赛的意义并提出建议
结尾:再次鼓励对方参加比赛
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Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词:to be held, talent for, sign up for, participate in, a much better understanding of
(2)佳句
①It is a good chance to show your talent for music, so I encourage you to sign up for it.
②What matters most is that you can improve your Chinese by participating in the contest.
Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:事实上, 你不必担心输赢。
Actually, you needn’t worry about whether you will win or lose.
句式升级(特殊句式)
Actually, there is no need to worry about whether you will win or lose.
要点2:最重要的是, 通过参加比赛, 你能提高你的汉语(水平)。
Most importantly, you can improve your Chinese by participating in the contest.
句式升级(主语从句, 表语从句)
What matters most is that you can improve your Chinese by participating in the contest.
Step 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear Kathy,
I am glad to know that you are interested in the Singing Chinese Folk Songs Contest to be held in your hometown. It is a good chance to show your talent for music, so I encourage you to sign up for it.
Actually, there is no need to worry about whether you will win or lose. What matters most is that you can improve your Chinese by participating in the contest. What’s more, in the activity you can make more friends who are interested in learning Chinese. If you want to do a great job, you should do more practice before the contest. Of course, it is a good idea to listen to some Chinese music programs before the contest so that you can get a much better understanding of Chinese folk music.
I am sure you can do a good job! Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
