对成功的理解
如何理解“成功”, 不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语(quotation), 按要求用英语写一篇短文。
“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm. ” —Sir Winston Churchill
内容要求:1. 你对该引语的理解;2. 你的相关经历;
3. 恰当的结尾。
注意:1. 短文开头已给出, 不计入总词数;
2. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息;
3. 词数:80左右。
练考场审题
Step 1:精准审题 谋篇布局
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人称
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时态
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一般现在时, 一般过去时
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段落布局
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开头点题: 点明对引语的理解
主题段落:用事例解释对这句话的理解
结尾:再次深化自己的观点
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Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉
(1)美词:get discouraged, enthusiasm, consist in, worse still, be about to do. . . when. . . , succeed in
(2)佳句:
① So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it.
② Looking back, I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.
Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花
要点1:我非常激动, 决定试骑一下。
一般表达:I was excited and tried my hand at riding it.
句式升级:(so. . . that. . . 倒装句)
我是如此激动以至于等不及要试骑一把了。
So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it. 
要点2:回顾过去, 我觉得如果我失去了信心, 就不能学会骑自行车。
一般表达:Looking back, I feel if I lost heart, I couldn’t learn to ride a bike.
句式升级(分词作状语, 虚拟语气):
回顾过去, 我觉得如果我失去了信心, 就不能学会骑自行车。
Looking back, I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.
