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(2020·浙江名校协作体二模改编)It was a Saturday afternoon.The color of the sky was changing,first light gray,then dark gray,and finally dark and dense.The wind was blowing heavily,and the trees were swaying in the strong wind.It began to rain cats and dogs.Soon,the road was filled with puddles from the rain.
On such a stormy afternoon,my mother took my fiveyearold brother,Christopher,and me to a new big toy store she had read about in the newspaper.“So many toys,” the advertisement had shouted in full and flashy color,“that we had to get a huge warehouse to fit them all!”
Christopher and I couldn't have been more excited.We ran across the parking lot,through the cold rain,as fast as our little legs could carry us.We left our mother outside to battle with the frustrating umbrella,which never worked when she wanted it to.“Christine!Take care of your young brother!” Mother shouted at the top of her voice.
“Christine!I'm going to find the Lego section (乐高积木区)!There's a new pirate ship I want,and I have four dollars!Maybe I can buy it!” Christopher exclaimed and ran off excitedly.I only half heard him.I took a right turn and,to my wideeyed delight,found myself in the midst of the Barbie (芭比) World.
I was studying a Barbie and doing some simple math in my head when suddenly an earthshaking clap of thunder roared from the storm outside.I jumped at the noise,dropping the doll to the floor.The lights flickered (闪烁) once and went out,covering everything in a blanket of blackness.Thunder continued to shake the sky and lightning illuminated the store for seconds,casting frightening shadows on my mind.
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“Oh no.” I thought.“Where's Christopher?”_______________
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“Christine,I'm here.”_________________________________
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“Oh no,” I thought.“Where's Christopher?” Scared,I was frozen on the spot,overcome with the need to see my brother,hug him and make certain he was all fight.My stomach twisted and turned inside.I ran up and down the aisles through the darkness,panic filling my small chest and making it difficult to breathe.I knocked into displays of candy and tripped over toys,all the while frantically calling my brother's name.Anxious as I was,I could barely see his figure.Tears of frustration and fear trickled down my face,but I continued to run.
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“Christine,I'm here.”Excitement took my breath away—there in the dark Lego aisle I found Christopher.He was standing alone,perfectly still,hiding under the pirate ship set.I began to cry out from relief,throwing my arms around him and hugged him tightly.He hugged me back,saying,“I knew if I waited here,Christine,you would be able to find me.” Then,I took his hand in mine and we went to find our mother,who must be desperately searching the store for us.