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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10 处,多者(从11处起)不计分。
(2020·安徽淮北市高三第一次模拟考试)
My senior high school life is almost over.Although exciting about entering college,I can’t help miss those good old days so much that I feel sad.I’m unwilling to say goodbye to everyone and everything I am familiar.However,I come to realize nature never stood still.Different seasons come and go.Plants and animals die and new one come to life.We,like everything in nature,has to adapt to the changes.Before knowing it,I am a kind of calm. Now I’d like to recall the most wonderful things what have happened,and accept happy whatever is to happen.
【答案】
My senior high school life is almost over.Although about entering college,I can’t help those good old days so much that I feel sad.I’m unwilling to say goodbye to everyone and everything I am familiar .However,I come to realize nature never still.Different seasons come and go.Plants and animals die and new come to life.We,like everything in nature, to adapt to the changes. knowing it,I am a kind of calm. Now I’d like to recall the most wonderful things have happened,and accept whatever is to happen.
【解析】 这是一篇记叙文。作者描述了在即将进入大学之前的一些感受。
1.考查形容词。此处是让步状语从句的省略,当时间/条件/让步状语从句的主语与主句主语一致,且有be动词时,可以省略从句的主语及be动词,同时修饰的是主语I的感情,应使用ed结尾形容词,excited“(感到)兴奋的”,而exciting“令人兴奋的”,常修饰物。本句完整句子为Although (I am) excited about entering college,I can’t help...。故将exciting改为excited。
2.考查非谓语动词。根据短语can’t help doing表示“情不自禁做……”后跟动词-ing形式。故将miss改为missing。
3.考查介词。根据短语be familiar with表示“熟悉”。故在familiar后加with。
4.考查动词时态。此处描述客观事实应使用一般现在时,且主语为nature,谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式。故将stood改为stands。
5.考查代词。此处指代上文plants and animals,应用ones泛指复数名词。故将one改为ones。
6.考查主谓一致。本句主语为we,且时态为一般现在时,谓语动词应该使用have。故将has改为have。
7.考查介词。句意:在知道这件事情之后,我冷静下来了。表示“在……之后”应用after。句首字母要大写。故将Before改为After。
8.考查冠词。根据短语kind of表示“有点儿,有几分”,常用来修饰形容词和副词。故删掉kind前面a。
9.考查定语从句。本句为定语从句修饰先行词the most wonderful thing,关系词在定语从句中作主语,且该先行词被形容词最高级修饰,所以定语从句关系代词只能用that。故将what改为that。
10.考查副词。此处修饰动词accept,应用happy的副词形式happily,表示“开心地”。故将happy改为happily。